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Gollem by ladyjart Gollem by ladyjart
Gollum off of the Lord of the rings..
Done with Sharpie marker and Colored pencils..
5Hrs
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Overall, this is an effective work, eliciting what I am sure is the intended reaction of the viewer... a sort of inner "EEeeek!". The cropped composition suggests that the viewer is peeking through the crack of a door and Gollum has come up close to point and say menacingly, "I ssssee you!"

The only area I think lacking is your technique. The likeness is spot on, and in every other way a great drawing. But the lines in this drawing, as opposed to many of your other works, has a rather haphazard appearance. I really think the addition of colored pencil is the culprit here. You work on smooth card stock for good reason, it is the best ground for the sharpie markers, but conversely, it is the worst ground for colored pencil. If you want to colorize these kind of drawings, you should invest in some art markers designed to be used on this sort of paper and that blend: Prismacolor art markers, or Copic markers. They are spendy, though! Perhaps as an alternative, very light washes of watercolor, but not too much water, as it buckles card stock. A very striking way to use color on an otherwise pure black-and-white drawing is a single color to highlight a feature. In this case, I think just the shockingly blue eye would be best.

You're a very talented artist! Keep up the great work and never stop learning! :D
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tlHunter Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Nice. Definitely jumps out from other stuff when scrolling. 
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toht981 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Is it tasty? Is it scruuuumptious? Is it crunchable?
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:iconwerol:
werol Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
well done!
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ulltraz Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
hehehe nice!!!Love 
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:iconladyjart:
ladyjart Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much..:)
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ulltraz Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
you are welcome!!!Love 
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Purestrongpoem Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Great picture.
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:iconladyjart:
ladyjart Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much..:)
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Purestrongpoem Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem.
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GalumptiousGecko Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The awesomeness...I..I can't even...:iconcannotevenplz:

Incredible job! I love The Lord of the Rings and the Hobbit, so this is just so cool. Keep up the awesome work! :)
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:iconladyjart:
ladyjart Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much..:)
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PictureOnProgress Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's a creepy look... :fear:
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:iconladyjart:
ladyjart Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes it is..:)
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PictureOnProgress Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
At least I could sleep last night :dummy:
Perhaps it's not that creepy :B
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Harmony-Walls Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh Gollum , your such a cute creepy guy ... love how his eyes stand out !
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:iconladyjart:
ladyjart Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks glad you enjoy him..:)
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:iconmayeaux:
Mayeaux Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My precious!
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:iconladyjart:
ladyjart Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:)
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V-pal97 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student General Artist
That's is so freaking cool :D
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:iconladyjart:
ladyjart Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks..Glad you like him..:)
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V-pal97 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome :)
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BluDraconoid Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:icongollumplz: Precious!
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ladyjart Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:)
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cuddleskitty Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...Impressive...
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:iconladyjart:
ladyjart Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much..:)
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cuddleskitty Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're quite welcome; you make me jealous with your skills:D
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Grace-Zed Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
nice work! :clap:
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:iconladyjart:
ladyjart Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you..glad you enjoy him..:)
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Grace-Zed Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you are welcome~ :) 
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Sketchjitsu Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I always felt sorry for Gollum,every time I see him I say to myself for "God's sake somebody give him a sandwich!"
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:iconladyjart:
ladyjart Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know how you feel..:)
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SEwing0109 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Fantastic job! Genuinely creepy.
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:iconladyjart:
ladyjart Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much glad you like him..:)
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SEwing0109 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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TimberSlashWolf Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very awesome work!!:)
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:iconladyjart:
ladyjart Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks so much..:)
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TimberSlashWolf Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome!:)
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Music---Junky Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's AWESOME! xD
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:iconladyjart:
ladyjart Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks glad you like him..:)
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