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The Creeper

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ladyjart
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This is another cover for my Noir comics The Creeper..
they borth are in the infant stages..
So let me know what you all think..I may not even stay with the same title so let me know what you think..Do you like the look of the two covers..

Scene:
Is this man with the gag..
The terror on his face..
Is he a creeping..
or a stealing
Or is he a someones meal for their dinner plate..

Enjoy
Lady J..:)
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Yay! This is the first work I have seen from you to have some color. I'm glad you mixed it up a little. And the red of course fits without a doubt. The whole image reads horror and fear, the eyes really read, so great job at capturing mood and emotion.
But what bothers me is the thing across his lower cheek and near his mouth. I don't know, but it looks like he is eating paper. I don't know what you are intending, but if it was something to silence him, then the cloth would tightly be fastened and would be inside his mouth, his lips over it, and not showing teeth. If it was tape it would cover his entire mouth and lips included. And it wouldn't not fold like it looks here.
But again, good work and all the best with you noir comics.